Plot Re-write! (In the Making) 3-24-10

This will be done over time so that we get everyone's opinions in while I write it.

First off, I am doing a prologue as I am taking the series a whole new direction with assistance by Jojo. With this, I'll lay out how the series is going to be like.

In the Prologue, we re-experience what Dominic experienced in that one moment in time when he was younger as a child. An event that he will never remember and that we only see glimpses of. The reason why is that I intend the game to be played out in every path possible.

For each path you take, you unlock more of what happened in Dominic's past. If you spend more time with your buddies (Renold) then you unlock more of the past (about roughly 2/5). Spending time exclusively with Anemone will grant you 1/5 of the story. Spending time exclusively with Eurie will grant you 1/5 of the story. The remaining 1/5 of the past will come from context clues in the entire novel (open to all paths).

The underlying thing is... Dominic and Anemone HAVE met in the past. And the short amount of time they spent together (7 days) changed them into who we know now as individuals. This whole thing in the past, however, is completely unknown to them because both have blocked the tragic memory in their minds, however only remnants of what have happened still remain and influence them to the day.

Anyone have problems with that? Suggestions? Fill it in to the comments. For now, I begin the prologue.

“Young Lovers on a Snowy Hill” - A Work In Progress (Title is also a WIP)

Prologue

I think I can remember… back to when I was younger than I was now…

There was a hill that I used to play around on… But…

There was something about it... yes...

Something about it...

I'd used to go there for some reason...

When I was there... I would be really happy and enjoy my time...

What was it that made me so happy...?

I can’t remember exactly… I guess I lied…

But… there was a figure… that much I know…

Was it a boy… a girl…?

Doesn’t matter… all I can remember clearly was that one tree on the top of that snow encrusted hill.

Every time I think about, I feel happy, but at the same time, there is a pain in my heart.

Maybe I just miss playing near it?

No… that’s not it…

Maybe it was the figure? Of course! It was probably an adult or someone who didn’t want me to play around the tree.

But that doesn’t make sense…

There wasn’t anything I was doing wrong with the tree….

The leaves would have already died and the fruits wouldn’t live.

I couldn’t be able to do anything to the tree anyways!

Then why does thinking of the tree hurt so much?

And that figure… why can’t I remember who it is?

Something happened the last few days I was there. That much I am sure of.

No other reason why I don’t even have any other memories of that tree.

Geez… why I am still thinking about a hill and a stupid tree?

It’s probably state-owned or something and it was a police officer.

Yeah that’s right; it was probably a police officer.

Well anyways… I can’t spend all my time thinking about this.

I’ve just been transferred into a new highschool.

How fun.

Well… this new highschool…

Wait… do you know who I am?

Well if you don’t, my name’s Dominic.

Anyways… this new highschool seems interesting… Maybe I’ll meet a few new girls. Maybe a lover…

But anyways, my first day of school is tomorrow. I’m ready to tackle it.

It’s time to move forward my friends… move… forward…