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Synopsis:
A young man by the name of Dominic transfers into a new school. Being new, he doesn’t really know anyone. However, this one shy, aloof glasses-wearing girl by the name of Anemone catches his eye. When he asks his female classmate who sits next to him who she is, she merely says that she is quite the odd-ball. Dominic finds Anemone to be quite a cute girl despite her overall emotionless nature. However, before he even tries to talk to Anemone, he learns that she is about to transfer to another school. Alas, the girl who told Dominic who Anemone was, whose name is Eureka, likes Dominic. But something is not right about Anemone, and Dominic undertakes an investigation of sorts to figure out more about Anemone’s life, and her mysterious past. Alongside him is Eureka, who is also interested about the strange Anemone; however her true intentions are to get closer to him and to try and grab his attention. In the middle of his trivial efforts to get to Anemone, a young man by the name of Renton intervenes as he has fallen in love with Eureka. And just to spice things up, Anemone has a slight crush on Renton. In this epic novel, will Dominic end up with Anemone? Perhaps even Eureka? Or even, none at all. This spectacular story of love in the new visual novel “Young Lovers on a Snowy Hill” (temporary name only) created by the Gamers Simulators Club.
Temporary Plot Outline:
“Young Lovers on a Snowy Hill”
Act I
I think I can remember… back to when I was younger than I was now…
There was a hill that I used to play around on… But…
Some family had purchased it… I didn’t know them, but I hear that they used it for something…
Anyways, this was only a passing thought as I enter my new high school.
I had recently transferred from my previous school that didn’t have any of the classes that I wanted to take.
By the way, my name is Dominic.
It is first period. Ugh. I don’t even know anyone here. There’s people talking to each other before class even begins, I feel left out.
Thankfully, the teacher came in and class began.
Halfway through my introduction, I notice a long-haired girl off to the corner who seemed indifferent to me. When I paused for a moment, she looked at me. She was wearing glasses and had some of the loveliest eyes I have ever seen in my life.
But her cryptic stare frightened me. She seemed emotionless… I hesitated for a moment, and then continued with my introduction.
While the teacher was looking for some paperwork that he was about to give to us, the girl next to me, Eureka, asking about me.
I was talking to her about myself, when the subject of why I hesitated during the introduction came up. I told her that I noticed this one girl whose lack of emotion surprised me.
So Eureka told me about Anemone, the young girl whose strange actions puzzled me. Apparently, according to Eureka, Anemone always seemed to be out of place in her classes. She never talked to anyone, she ate her lunch alone, and she rarely spoke, and if she ever did, it was in short monosyllabic words.
This odd but pretty girl shocked me. So I set out to get to know her more.
After first period, I tried to say “Hi” to her, but she just rushed out of the class.
Eureka seemed to notice this, and told me something that changed everything.
Anemone is transferring (or is planning) to another high school.
Act II
Thirty days, according to Eureka of course.
That’s exactly how long I had to get to know this girl, this … girl who seemed so out of place.
The first day passed with that thought in my mind. And as such, I’ve decided to recruit my new friend Eureka (who happens to have all of my classes) to assist me.
Anemone has three of mines: first period, obviously, then third period, and seventh period.
Do I have the time? I don’t know. I don’t even think Anemone would even give me the time of day let alone time to talk to her.
So on Saturday, I went with Eureka to find out about Anemone’s part time job at a place called the “Pellax Prolecto.” We had no idea what we were about to see.
Now you see here, the Pellax Prolecto is a ... meido kafe. It is a maid café. Eureka and I did not expect this.
While we were being seated by the maître d', we learned that we would be serviced by Anemone herself.
She wore that maid uniform perfectly. Quite perfectly, her uniform accented her demeanor in the shop.
She wore a navy-on-black uniform, accented with white. To my own dismay, I would have expected her to be flat!
But there was something else to this… a certain… sadness…
We finished our meal and left.
Act III-VII To be determined by Path Writers/Story Writers
Seductive Allure
Act VIII
A new student has transferred in. It’s been only fifteen days since I’ve met Anemone. New kid seems to be a pretty cool guy, eh has no care in the world and doesnt afraid of anything.
He happens to be in every one of my classes. And he sits next to me along with Eureka. God he’s annoying.
His name is Renton, a quaint person, modest at times. He seems to be fairly carefree. Interesting truly.
He likes Eureka; more or less. I can’t really tell. He keeps on bothering me with questions about her though. I know that much.
He’s been assisting me and Eureka into finding out more about Anemone. So far, what I know is that her family is well off and she works in a maid café.
Why is she well off?
More questions plague my mind, as her intelligence and these classes make this high school one of the best high schools in the county. Why would she want to transfer to another one?
Tests are coming up. I guess I’ll study with Eureka and Renton.
Actually, that reminds me, it seems as if Anemone is a bit livelier in class nowadays; I’ve seen her look at Renton every now and then. What is this? I don’t even-
Act IX-XIII To be Determined by Path Writers/Story Writers
Act XIX
It’s coming towards the end of the last six days of the thirty days, for that I am sure.
I’ve progressed well I believe… In a month at least…
Anemone Path – So now that I’ve managed to finally go on a date with Anemone, it leaves me thinking…
Eureka Path – I never knew that Eureka liked me… it is odd actually…
Double Path – By pure coincidental chance and the right things to do at the right time, I’ve strangely managed to get Anemone and Eureka to both like me. Huh…
Neither Path – Am I going to be a hikikomori for the rest of my life? I’ve not succeed with Anemone, and I’ve managed to push Eureka away from me. Perhaps it is time for me to be an hero?
A young man by the name of Dominic transfers into a new school. Being new, he doesn’t really know anyone. However, this one shy, aloof glasses-wearing girl by the name of Anemone catches his eye. When he asks his female classmate who sits next to him who she is, she merely says that she is quite the odd-ball. Dominic finds Anemone to be quite a cute girl despite her overall emotionless nature. However, before he even tries to talk to Anemone, he learns that she is about to transfer to another school. Alas, the girl who told Dominic who Anemone was, whose name is Eureka, likes Dominic. But something is not right about Anemone, and Dominic undertakes an investigation of sorts to figure out more about Anemone’s life, and her mysterious past. Alongside him is Eureka, who is also interested about the strange Anemone; however her true intentions are to get closer to him and to try and grab his attention. In the middle of his trivial efforts to get to Anemone, a young man by the name of Renton intervenes as he has fallen in love with Eureka. And just to spice things up, Anemone has a slight crush on Renton. In this epic novel, will Dominic end up with Anemone? Perhaps even Eureka? Or even, none at all. This spectacular story of love in the new visual novel “Young Lovers on a Snowy Hill” (temporary name only) created by the Gamers Simulators Club.
Temporary Plot Outline:
“Young Lovers on a Snowy Hill”
Act I
I think I can remember… back to when I was younger than I was now…
There was a hill that I used to play around on… But…
Some family had purchased it… I didn’t know them, but I hear that they used it for something…
Anyways, this was only a passing thought as I enter my new high school.
I had recently transferred from my previous school that didn’t have any of the classes that I wanted to take.
By the way, my name is Dominic.
It is first period. Ugh. I don’t even know anyone here. There’s people talking to each other before class even begins, I feel left out.
Thankfully, the teacher came in and class began.
Halfway through my introduction, I notice a long-haired girl off to the corner who seemed indifferent to me. When I paused for a moment, she looked at me. She was wearing glasses and had some of the loveliest eyes I have ever seen in my life.
But her cryptic stare frightened me. She seemed emotionless… I hesitated for a moment, and then continued with my introduction.
While the teacher was looking for some paperwork that he was about to give to us, the girl next to me, Eureka, asking about me.
I was talking to her about myself, when the subject of why I hesitated during the introduction came up. I told her that I noticed this one girl whose lack of emotion surprised me.
So Eureka told me about Anemone, the young girl whose strange actions puzzled me. Apparently, according to Eureka, Anemone always seemed to be out of place in her classes. She never talked to anyone, she ate her lunch alone, and she rarely spoke, and if she ever did, it was in short monosyllabic words.
This odd but pretty girl shocked me. So I set out to get to know her more.
After first period, I tried to say “Hi” to her, but she just rushed out of the class.
Eureka seemed to notice this, and told me something that changed everything.
Anemone is transferring (or is planning) to another high school.
Act II
Thirty days, according to Eureka of course.
That’s exactly how long I had to get to know this girl, this … girl who seemed so out of place.
The first day passed with that thought in my mind. And as such, I’ve decided to recruit my new friend Eureka (who happens to have all of my classes) to assist me.
Anemone has three of mines: first period, obviously, then third period, and seventh period.
Do I have the time? I don’t know. I don’t even think Anemone would even give me the time of day let alone time to talk to her.
So on Saturday, I went with Eureka to find out about Anemone’s part time job at a place called the “Pellax Prolecto.” We had no idea what we were about to see.
Now you see here, the Pellax Prolecto is a ... meido kafe. It is a maid café. Eureka and I did not expect this.
While we were being seated by the maître d', we learned that we would be serviced by Anemone herself.
She wore that maid uniform perfectly. Quite perfectly, her uniform accented her demeanor in the shop.
She wore a navy-on-black uniform, accented with white. To my own dismay, I would have expected her to be flat!
But there was something else to this… a certain… sadness…
We finished our meal and left.
Act III-VII To be determined by Path Writers/Story Writers
Seductive Allure
Act VIII
A new student has transferred in. It’s been only fifteen days since I’ve met Anemone. New kid seems to be a pretty cool guy, eh has no care in the world and doesnt afraid of anything.
He happens to be in every one of my classes. And he sits next to me along with Eureka. God he’s annoying.
His name is Renton, a quaint person, modest at times. He seems to be fairly carefree. Interesting truly.
He likes Eureka; more or less. I can’t really tell. He keeps on bothering me with questions about her though. I know that much.
He’s been assisting me and Eureka into finding out more about Anemone. So far, what I know is that her family is well off and she works in a maid café.
Why is she well off?
More questions plague my mind, as her intelligence and these classes make this high school one of the best high schools in the county. Why would she want to transfer to another one?
Tests are coming up. I guess I’ll study with Eureka and Renton.
Actually, that reminds me, it seems as if Anemone is a bit livelier in class nowadays; I’ve seen her look at Renton every now and then. What is this? I don’t even-
Act IX-XIII To be Determined by Path Writers/Story Writers
Act XIX
It’s coming towards the end of the last six days of the thirty days, for that I am sure.
I’ve progressed well I believe… In a month at least…
Anemone Path – So now that I’ve managed to finally go on a date with Anemone, it leaves me thinking…
Eureka Path – I never knew that Eureka liked me… it is odd actually…
Double Path – By pure coincidental chance and the right things to do at the right time, I’ve strangely managed to get Anemone and Eureka to both like me. Huh…
Neither Path – Am I going to be a hikikomori for the rest of my life? I’ve not succeed with Anemone, and I’ve managed to push Eureka away from me. Perhaps it is time for me to be an hero?
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